Rate my yugioh tele-dad deck and answer the question?

I think you have a good deck here. I like your spells and traps they are good. But you should take out two or one of those solemn judgment's. Paying half your life three times will hurt don't you think? Also three 3x destiny hero defenders is kind of to much much. Also I would take one of those out. Yes of course he has good defense, but he helps out your opponent too much! Also he is hard to destroy. But I do think you have a good deck. I was just making some ideas that's all. Maybe some day I'll have the honor of dueling you with it. I'll give it a 8 out of 10.